Thanks for leaving such a lovely review on my blog, I thought I would return the favour.
Great to see you venture to write a poem in the style of Emily Dickinson. I feel this is a significant start to a longer piece of work. I would like to encourage you to work on it some more and expand your poem. Dickinson liked to write in short stanzas and short sentences, usually rhyming on the second and fourth lines. Perhaps you could also try this when writing. Good work! Please keep going.