Peer Review #3 – 19th Century Lit

What a wonderful post, Alana. You have managed to evoke a feeling of lost summers. The photo you have included compliments your piece while adding additional emotions to your story. In particular the golden sunset sits well with your words ” our hair soaked with the smell of fire”. What Aussie kid hasn’t experienced this during their childhood? Your piece brings forth memories for me of camping in summer by the lake. I only wish your story was a little longer- I want to hear more! Top job!

https://alanasheltonblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/21/7-creative-write-a-poem-or-a-short-prose-piece-that-has-been-inspired-by-one-of-the-literary-texts-that-we-have-looked-at/comment-page-1/#comment-7

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