Peer Review #2 – 19th Century Lit

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Hi Belle,
A great attempt at entering into the mind of Emma. I would have liked an expanded view of the `it’ that Emma was seeking. The inner challenges you present of Emma redefining the word `friend’ is very well presented. I can almost see her face while she considers these new thoughts. A friendly observation- don’t forget to use capital letters at the beginning of sentences. 🙂

https://annabellebarnslicha.wordpress.com/2017/03/27/blog-two-emma/comment-page-1/#comment-74

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