Peer Review #1

Hi Annabelle,
Thank you for sharing this story with us. I am so happy that after many years apart that you have reconnected with your brother again. There is also 4 years age difference between myself and my younger brother. We were close as kids and didn’t really get along in our teenage years but are best friends now as adults. I love the image of the wave- water is very healing and cleanses both body and soul. Nice addition to your post.
Paul and Kat’s friendship is one of circumstance but that does not make it is any less meaningful. I was touched by this moment that they shared in the hut. A memory that will live on after the war is over. Nice to know that amongst the horrors of war there is a tender and warm moment shared.
Great post! See you in class.
Brendon

https://annabellebarnslicha.wordpress.com/2016/08/27/w5-unwavering-connection/comment-page-1/#comment-41

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