Peer Review #5

Hi Caitlin,
I enjoyed `The Cool Green’ too and liked your take on it, however, I would have liked for you to explain further on why you agree with Murray. I believe in the second last line Murray is saying that humans have forsaken art, enlightenment and the value of life and is now driven by making money.
Also- just be careful of spelling mistakes and punctuation in your blogs. These can change the meaning of your sentences.
Cheers,
Brendon

https://caitlineastman97.wordpress.com/2016/05/20/blog-8/comment-page-1/#comment-13

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