Peer Review #3

Hey Joel,

Interesting entry you have here. I enjoy the `contrast of perspectives of each individual’ take especially. I’ve always been fascinated on how people can see the same scene but view it in an opposite way- in this case, Bobby and Chaine. You mentioned one of my favourite lines in the novel as well- ”Bobby heard the whales singing. They sang for him”.

Just be mindful of spelling mistakes. For example- definitely and defiantly are easy words to misspell and can change the meaning of your sentence.

See you in class!

Brendon

https://joelwhitlockblog.wordpress.com/2016/03/16/that-deadman-dance-week-2/comment-page-1/#comment-5

 

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